sing a song

sing a song 
for self,
lost the rhythm ?  
the rhythm of repose,
within!
that is lost years back!
amidst burgeoning
chaos,pains
and 
struggles for life
or
practising selfishness,
profligacy all along...
in any case,
sing a song now
bleaching your mind
removing the remnant
anxieties,fear
and complexities of heart
with a head held high
sing it aloud
thinking beyond self!
sing a song of empathy,kindness
and of hope,
in praise of God,
for a buoyant rendition. 

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13 comments

  1. Swati satpathy · May 22, 2016

    Sing a song loudly deep from the heart is a beautiful way to love yourself. Sir u have very well described it.

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  2. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · May 22, 2016

    Thank you for your kind comment and take on the poem .I appreciate your thought.

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  3. Manoranjan Dash · May 22, 2016

    Sing a song in praise of God.Be happy ,remove worries & complexity even if the lyric is lost.
    Very nice thought.Worthy piece
    Thanks.

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  4. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · May 22, 2016

    Yes sing a song in praise of God, Glad that you you found it worthy.Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

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  5. prettyflyforawhitemom · May 22, 2016

    I like the line” bleaching your mind, removing the remnant anxieties.” – it’s a nice image of clearing oneself out. I get a little lost in some of the lines. When I teach poetry, and I’m no expert by any means, I always teach to read from punctuation mark to punctuation mark- that that’s how a poet often will chunk ideas that are meant to go together. You may have a different form, but for someone like me who is not a poet, I get a little lost without. For example, ” sing a song for self lost the rhythm?” A comma or hyphen after self seems needed- now I don’t know if you don’t want one and all those ideas are to go together, or you want me to pause at the end of a line for in other places of the poem that doesn’t seem to work. I’m not trying to be nit picky- there are many beautiful images in the poem and a great resounding message of recapturing the essence of oneself that seems to have been lost amidst chaos. But you asked for my feedback so this is my honest opinion.

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    • Springstart@life : Kamakhya · May 22, 2016

      Thank you so much for your time, infact I meant the reader to pause in second line before going further so that a flow is understood,however,a “comma” would be a better link,i agree.I have put the”comma” I really appreciate your reading n suggestion.Glad you liked the essence of poem.

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  6. Debashish · May 23, 2016

    Sing a song,just sing a song ,feel the internal happiness and leave all worries,own your space,very nice and thought provoking.

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  7. Pratuesha Mishra · May 26, 2016

    Pranam Mamu Sing a song beautiful poem for god it makes mind free from worries brings happiness for life .

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  8. A tongue that Blah 👅 · June 6, 2016

    Singinggg something which i do all the time. Nice post.😄

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