That long silence

is

after the long nattering 
your abrupt silence 
made me evaluate 
where i had gone wrong!
where is the scope for amendment
on my part 
questioning the answers  
and answering the questions 
i confronted  on my way
the fear of loss 
and hope for a happy comeback
engaging me all through out 
making me looking out for 
the locksmith of hope 
to unlock the deadlock!
i told my heart 
to stay cool
to persevere 
it is nothing more than 
an obscure patch
may be a swing of mood 
don't know why 
this time 
the normalcy did not return
the silence taking longer
to get dismantled 
longer enough to reinstate 
the original comeback!
leaving behind 
the memento of that long silence
with me 
for ever      
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20 comments

  1. Swati satpathy · August 15, 2016

    Poetry has really made me feel the silence๐Ÿ‘Œ

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  2. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · August 15, 2016

    Thank you swati for reading! Blessings dear !

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  3. sailajaP14 · August 15, 2016

    Long silences either spell doom or revaluation of the relationship in progress…one way or the other it brings the truth out. And to learn the truth takes a lot. To accept it is another trial. Lovely poem, Kamakhya, full of questions and longing. Very relatable. ๐Ÿ˜€ Have a joy-filled day!

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  4. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · August 15, 2016

    Thank you so much sailaja! True ,long silence means a lot in relationship having varied implications! At times emotionally so hurtful! Nice time to you too! Blessings.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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  5. sima dash · August 15, 2016

    Very meaningful narration of the simple word…silence.

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  6. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · August 15, 2016

    Thank you Sima for reading n lovely comment๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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  7. Pauletry · August 15, 2016

    I like it

    Liked by 1 person

  8. GILDASPOEMS · August 16, 2016

    Silence can be a powerful weapon, yes!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · August 16, 2016

    Thanks Gilda a lot! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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  10. viladev · August 23, 2016

    I love how the words come out so easily and sound so perfect! ๐Ÿ˜€

    Liked by 1 person

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  12. richardjh3 · September 11, 2016

    Very nice. If handled properly silence is wonderful. I think it depends on how you live your life. Keep up the good writings.

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  13. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · September 11, 2016

    Thank you Richard for the inspiration.

    Like

  14. Sheri Lawrence de Grom · October 11, 2016

    Kamakhya – Your words are laid out precisely and paint an exquisite picture. They flow past the windows of my soul and spell love. Thank you for this presentation. Sheri

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