may be 
the worries,anxieties,
fear,pain,the undivine forces,
the bondages..
my friends for life,
make me believe 
my abode is hell,
i will not trust them anymore
for they are like an overcast sky
covered with the passing clouds 
of my daily thoughts and conduct
and the sun will come out shining
pushing my imperfections and limitations away!
for i know
i am the child of God
to see only the light
to experience the eternal truth
the conscious realization of Almighty
the truth of freeing mind 
from the meshes of ignorance
or teeming darkness
to see the divinity's reality
in manifestation of my surrender
in my seeing the rays of omnipotence everywhere,
to find my way to heaven
right here on earth!
without waiting for death 
to unravel it for me. 


  1. Amitav Chowdhury · September 24, 2016

    This ultimate realization emphatically expressed with words chosen with care. This surrender to the Divine is an eternal seeker’s wish and the omniscient knowledge will be bestowed to the worthy traveler.

    Beauty of a write. Loved this poem immensely.

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  2. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · September 24, 2016

    The fact of the matter always remains to know the true nature of immortal soul that owes its genesis to the omnipotent . once this gets understood n the doership credit is discounted , then complete surrender steers us to glory, bliss or Heaven which is nothing but infinite peace ! Many thanks Amitav for your valued words .Much appreciated. Peace be to All !

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Infinite Living · September 25, 2016

    to see the divinity’s reality
    in manifestation of my surrender …these lines caught my attention …such deep meaning there. Great composition, the whole poem!

    Liked by 2 people

    • Springstart@life : Kamakhya · September 25, 2016

      Many thanks for your lovely comment, itz all abt how we realize that truth in our bid to live a life on earth ..as good as heaven .Be blessed.

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  4. ssidhi · September 25, 2016

    Wonderful and so truly said about the friends and the clouds.. Perfect.. Lovely poem.

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  5. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · September 25, 2016

    Thank you Sid a lot for the inspiring words, may these friends n clouds get away for the light ahead in life ! Blessings.


  6. Misggrace · September 25, 2016

    True, we cant wait for death to unravel heaven… Heaven is a sure place to be… and even before death, we can still experience it , by God’s grace, before we head to meet our maker.. i always love your poems

    Liked by 2 people

  7. The Hedonist · September 25, 2016

    This is the most beautiful thing I have read today. 😊
    And how much I could relate to this writing. I so much felt as if these are the words of my subconscious.
    Brilliant work as usual.

    – Anushka

    Liked by 2 people

  8. GILDASPOEMS · September 26, 2016

    Love❤️! Especially last line. Very hopeful & beautifully written.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Moushmi Radhanpara · September 26, 2016

    A beautiful poem!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. themodernmedici · September 27, 2016

    I love the way you use words. You’re a very eloquent writer my friend

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Sahana · September 27, 2016

    Hello. Congrats, I’ve nominated you to the “Sunshine Blogger award.” You can check out the link here. https://jazzlilyblog.wordpress.com/2016/09/27/sunshine-blogger-award/

    Liked by 1 person

  12. yudithc · September 29, 2016

    I like your perception on life. Hope to get more enlightened so please share some more. Thank you.

    Nominating you for 3days 3quotes challenge:
    Rules of the challenge: 1.Three quotes for three days. 2.Three nominees each day (no repetition). 3.Thank the person who nominated you. 4.Inform the nominees.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Springstart@life : Kamakhya · September 29, 2016

      Thank you a lot Yudith for the kind words,though I will try to contribute in quote, I am not sure dear , becoz of time constraints.Really appreciate your nominating me.Lots wishes.Love.

      Liked by 2 people

  13. Sima dash · September 29, 2016

    So nice poem….filled with positivity….warmth….loved it!!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. LazyHaze · September 29, 2016

    I nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award.
    If you choose to accept, here are the rules https://lazyhazeblog.wordpress.com/2016/09/29/blogger-recognition-award/


  15. sailajaP14 · September 30, 2016

    This is beautiful Kamakhya 👌

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Springstart@life : Kamakhya · September 30, 2016

    Thanks a lot Sailaja!


  17. Roland's Ragbag · October 2, 2016

    Powerful thoughts, and so well expressed. You might like to take a look at some of my own verse, although more often than not I tend to use rhyme.

    Liked by 1 person

  18. kaitlyn june · November 28, 2016

    it is a great blog.
    u r gud

    Liked by 1 person

  19. thesilence2017 · May 7, 2017

    “without waiting for death
    to unravel it for me. ”

    Sure thing, Death is only a Transmutation – we must live now, with all the strong we can gather. Thanks for the text, God bless you. 🙂


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