Dear Mind!


the horizon is not fixed 
the assortment of layers,
sprinting from the mould of subconscious
to the mound of hidden subtle thoughts,
biased or unbiased
rich or trivial 
the cruise encompassing from here to there,
from least to most
from mundane to surrealism 
from the transparent ambience of heart
to knoll of jumpier sniveling!
if you are with me now
the next moment you accompany me
to them or there,dissecting everything,
forming the cocoon of my behaviors!
at times I wonder
who controls you
are you auto-controlled!
or it is my wisdom or ignorance,
my background,my persuasion,
my being prone to hypnosis around! 
or my neurotransmitter
I once thought to bring a rope
to chain you in a corner,
unplugging from the main socket,
only to invite a stinking darkness
go wherever you want
no curb on your freedom
but just a request..
change your direction,may it mean a misdirection
towards the pinnacle of positivity,love
leaving the tracks of hatred,ignorance or fear
far behind 
for the endorphins of goodness,
brainwashing,persuading all that come in between
for you make my day
perhaps you make me what I am!


  1. Amitav Chowdhury · November 13, 2016

    ‘sprinting from the mould of subconscious
    to the mound of hidden subtle thoughts’

    You really know how to use words with optimally and drive in the real essence of the poem. I picked out my two favorite lines from a fantastic poem. Loved it!

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  2. sailajaP14 · November 14, 2016

    Beautiful and moving, Kamakhya. Thanks for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Infinite Living · November 14, 2016

    So beautiful, great composition!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. skd · November 17, 2016

    Thanks! Had a chat with the mind! Nice! Btb, could you please elaborate “knoll of jumpier sniveling”.

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    • Springstart@life : Kamakhya · November 18, 2016

      Thank you , glad to know you had a chat with mind too.. The way human mind sprints unabated from here to there this context it passes through the best of our times to knoll of all our unfavourable mental agonies as well ( knoll of jumpier sniveling) ..many a times a route of mind being dependent on our background or as we take our lives .A more enlightened mind knows how to modulate the direction of mind ! ” knoll of jumpier sniveling ” thus here means another arena that we subject our mind to cruise through . Good times.

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      • skd · November 18, 2016

        Makes sense. Crisp! Thanks.

        Liked by 1 person

  5. GILDASPOEMS · November 19, 2016

    So much food for thought here in this thought provoking poem on the mind!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. kelleysdiy · December 8, 2016

    Very wonderful!

    Liked by 1 person

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